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We did a marshmallow challenge on Tuesday?s HROB class. We tried to use 20 sticks of spaghetti, one-yard tape and one-yard string to build a tallest freestanding structure with a marshmallow on top.
It is a great activity and we got a nice result. Emma and I did the same activity last year in a same group. Emma as our leader, she helps our team to achieve a very good result. First of all, we tried to find out the best way on google. We searched for some images and found out that; most of the structure with solid and high constructions uses triangles at the bottom. The triangle is the most stable shape. In this case, our structure is basically composed of many triangles. Then, we tied up the unstable place with string. We encountered some difficulties when we were putting the string. The material is easy to break, so we have to be careful. We overcame the last difficulty and finally put the marshmallows gently on the top. We get 66cm. It is a great result and we are very proud of it. I am just thinking about the importance of teamwork. Jonathan is responsible for holding the tape, Gabi is responsible for fixing the entire structure, and Emma, Callan and I are responsible for setting up. No one stands beside to look. We did our own work seriously during the entire activity.
???? ?????From the activity, I figure out that teamwork supports a more empowered way of working by removing the constraints, which may prevent somebody from doing his/her own work. It also encourages multi-disciplinary work where the team cuts across the company or organizational divides. It also creates synergy where the sum is greater than the parts, this means that energy of many people is much better that energy of one person and is usually essential in an organization.


 


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